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短文改錯(cuò)dear篇一：2015高考英語(yǔ)一輪短文改錯(cuò)復(fù)習(xí)題有解析
短文改錯(cuò)
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(2014屆黑龍江省哈三中高三上學(xué)期第三次驗(yàn)收)
假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加: 在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧）, 并在其下寫(xiě)出該加的詞。
刪除: 把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。
修改: 在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線, 并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。
注意: 1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞;
2.只允許修改10處, 多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。
As is known, that it is interesting to teach children to swim while they are still babies. Most large town in Florida and California have already run particularly lessons for babies. The idea has quickly spread to Europe which, in several countries, special courses were now offered to children who are from 7 to 24
months old. The first step is to have child get rid of the fear with water. Next, he is teaching to float in water. Once he can do that naturally and can swim with fear, the child can master the technique and push him forward through water.
【答案】 1.去掉that
2. town改成 towns
3. particularly 改成particular
4. which改成where
5. were改成are
6. have與child之間加a
7. with water 改成 of water
8. teaching改成taught
9. with改成without
10. him改成himself
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（2014屆浙江省溫州中學(xué)高三上學(xué)期期中）
Dear Mr. Black,
I’m very thank to you for inviting me to stay with you in the come summer vacation. I have been dreamed of seeing you again so that I can get
examinations in present. I planned to visit you in winter if it’s convenient to you.
Best wishes.
Yours truly,
Li Ying
【答案】
1. thank改為thankful
2. come改為coming
3. dreamed改為dreaming
4. And改為But 5. 去掉in
6. she改為who
7. too改為so
8. find后面加it
9. in改為at
10. planned改為plan
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(2014屆浙江省浙北名校聯(lián)盟高三上學(xué)期期中聯(lián)考)
下面短文中有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，請(qǐng)?jiān)谟绣e(cuò)誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個(gè)單詞。
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏詞符號(hào)（∧），并在下面寫(xiě)上該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下畫(huà)一橫線，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)上修改后的詞。
注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均限一詞；
2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。
One year ago, I was in great trouble. I worked hard at English and devote all my spare time to practise it. But I failed to pass the mid-term examination, which made me great disappointed. So I asked my grandpa for advice when I got to home. Hearing that I told him, he said, “To some extent, examination results are sometime unexpected by your study level. You can’t judge your progress by one examination.” He
encouraged myself to work hard for long time to check my results. I took my grandpa’s advice. Now I realize that the process of learning is much more important and my English is more better than before. From my experience, I feel that we should listen to opinion from old people.
【答案】
1. devote → devoted
2. practise → practicing
3. great → greatly
4. 去掉to。
5. that → what
6. sometime →sometimes
7. myself → me
8. for和long 之間加a。
9. more → much
10. opinion → opinions
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（2013-2014學(xué)年內(nèi)蒙古包頭市一中高三入學(xué)考試）
假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（﹨）劃掉。
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。
注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞;
只允許修改10處,多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。
A man was driving on the road. Suddenly his cars stopped. He got out of the car tried to find out the trouble. “It’s the motor.” Said the voice behind him. He was surprising and turned around. But he saw only an old
horse. “Did you say something?” he asked. “I said you should check yours motor.” The horse replied. The man rushed to the nearest house. With a very excited voice, he told the farmer had happened. The farmer, therefore, showed no sign of excitement. He explained, “He didn’t know anything about cars. He can only repeat what I often say.
【答案】
1. cars改成car
2. tried→trying
3. the→a
4. surprising→surprised
5. something→anything
6. yours→ your
7. With →In
8. the farmer∧had →what
9. therefore→however
10. didn’t→doesn’t
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（2014屆浙江省江山實(shí)驗(yàn)中學(xué)高三上學(xué)期第一次階段性測(cè)試）
下面短文中有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤。請(qǐng)?jiān)谟绣e(cuò)誤的地方增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏詞符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一個(gè)橫線，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。
注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2.只允許修改10處，多者（從十一處起）不計(jì)分。
It is real a good chance to have met all of you here. We have spent several precious weekend in learning in the English Club. Although we have been members for a short period of times, we have made a great progress. That is because we are all very much active and the activities are not only enjoyable and also helpful. Besides, the foreign teachers here work hard and try his best to make the activities lively and interested. I am very pleased to say that all of us greatly improved our spoken English so far. I am looking forward to see all of you again in the near future!
【答案】
1. real--really
2. weekend--weekends
3. times--time
4. 去掉a
5. 去掉much
6. and--but
7. his--their
8. interested--interesting
9. us∧have
10. see--seeing
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（2014屆浙江省湖州市八校高三上學(xué)期第二次聯(lián)考）
下面短文中有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，請(qǐng)?jiān)谟绣e(cuò)誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個(gè)單詞。
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（^），并在其下面寫(xiě)上該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（/）劃掉。
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，在該詞下面寫(xiě)出改正后的詞。
注意：1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。
I can’t swim so I have a strong fear of water. Look back at my childhood, I think that three reasons might explain fear. Firstly, I am not allowed to go near the water when I was a child, as my mother had an
ueasonable fear of it. Therefore, I was taught to see to the water as something danger. Secondly, my eyes became bad when I was five. If I took off my glass in the water, I couldn’t see something, and this increased my fear. What’s worse, for a child I once saw a neighbor drowned. Since then I have been more frightening.
【答案】
1. so—because
2. look—looking
3. 加the
4. am—was
短文改錯(cuò)dear篇二：高中英語(yǔ)短文改錯(cuò),附答案
I have a good friend who’s name is Liu Mei. She is our monitor and one of the excellent student in our class. Although she is clever, but she works very hard. We have a lot on common and have a lot to talk about. One evening she told me that something happened when her parents was out. She was doing her homeworks one Sunday morning when she smelt something burning. She stopped look out of the window and find a cloud of smoke coming out of her neighbour’s house. She called 119 immediate. Ten minutes later, the firemen came and put out fire. Her neighbour was very thankful for her help.
改錯(cuò)二
I went to see the film after supper. On my way the cinema, I met an English woman, who lost her way. I gave up the chance see the film and took her to her hotel. While go there, I told her about great changes that had been taken place in the past few years and she had told me anything about her country. Although I missed the film, I still felt very happy, for I had not only helped her out of trouble but practise my spoken English. If I had not worked hard on English, I would have been able to help him.
改錯(cuò)三
Dear Ralph,
I'm a senior student. I'm getting well with a boy in my class. But I have fallen in love with him for almost half a year. He is shy boy, so I wrote him a letter first to express my feeling. He wrote back. In his letter he said, "We are students. Our task is study hard. Let us to wait and see whether we have some chance after graduation." So after graduation I telephoned to him, ask him about going out. But he said he didn't want to. He just wanted to sleep and watched TV. What do you think I should do? Do you think I should continue to love him and give up?
改錯(cuò)四
Dear Bob,
Hello. I learn about you from my English teacher, Miss Fang. I’d like to your penfriend, and get to know more about your country.
First, let me tell you something more about myself. My name is Li Hua. I live in Beijing, where is the capital of China. I go to Hongqi Middle School. We study quite a few subject, such as maths, Chinese, English and physics. I use to play ping-pong a lot on my spare time, but now I am interesting in football. Do you play any ball games? What your favorite sport? I look forward to hear from you soon.
Yours,Li Hua
Two months ago, I went to abroad for further study. Before I left, I was given a lot present. Among them， there were two presents which were really interested me. My sister buys me a book with color pictures about body language and with words about customs of different country in them. My brother gave me a note which read, “My present has put in your bedroom.” When I hurried into my bedroom, I found a box, in that there was an electronic dictionary. I was very glad but a few surprised to receive these two presents.
改錯(cuò)六
Dear Li Ming,
I have received your letter yesterday. Don’t worry about you. I’m getting along well with my research works in the lab. But, to my surprising, you say you will give up learn English. The reason is that you have not done well in it recently and you have lost interesting. I’m afraid I can’t agree with you. I know it is not easy to learn English, and English is widely used in the world today and it will be important tool in your future work. Besides, it is becoming more and more important at our daily life. If you study hard, you will succeed. Do remember where is a will, there is a way.
改錯(cuò)七
Some students don’t like talking about their parents often as if their parents love them very much. Are you going on well with your parents? You and your parents will be very happy if you can be friend. Here are some way to have a good talk with them. Find a good time to talk, like when you’re eating dinner, going out for walk and watching TV. Tell them something you’re interested in, or ask them about their life when they are young. They love to talk about our past! Meet them face to face and listen to them carefully. Be honesty, and your parents will trust you more.
改錯(cuò)八
One afternoon Jack is walking down a river along. It was very cold day and on the river few boats could be seen．When he stopped on a bridge and look down, he saw a terrible scene. A boy fell of a canoe(獨(dú)木舟) and was struggling in the water．Without think about herself, Jack jumped into the river and to save the boy． He was about to drag（拖） the boy to the river bank then he saw some people stand in a motor boat under the bridge． One of them stared Jack and said angrily, “They are making a film and you’ve spoiled a whole afternoon’s work!”
答案：
改錯(cuò)一：who's 改為whose 2.正確 3.去掉but 4.on改為in 5.parents后加were 6.homeworks改為homework 7.stopped后加to 8.find改為found 9.immediate改為immediately 10.fire前加the
改錯(cuò)二： the改為a 2.正確 3.see前加to 4.go改為going 5.去掉been 6.
去掉had 7.去掉but
8.去掉had 9.on改為at 10.him改為her
改錯(cuò)三：1.getting 后加on或along 2.fallen改為been 3.shy前加a 4.feeling改為feelings 當(dāng)情感講時(shí)feeling常用單數(shù) 5.study前加to或study改為studying 6.去掉to 7.去掉to 8.watched改為watch 9正確 10.and改為or
改錯(cuò)四：1. learn 改為 learnt或learned。2. to 后加 be 或 become。3. 刪去more。第一次告訴 Bob 關(guān)于自己的一些事情， 此處用 more 不合邏輯。4. where 改為 which。在此非限定性定語(yǔ)從句中， 關(guān)系詞在從句中作主語(yǔ)， 故用 which。5. 此行無(wú)錯(cuò)。6. subject 改為 subjects。quits a few 意為“相當(dāng)多”， 修飾可數(shù)名詞復(fù)數(shù)。7. use 改為 used。據(jù)下文 but now 可知， 此處應(yīng)用used to do 表示“過(guò)去常常 做某事”。8. interesting 改為 interested。be interested in?為固定短語(yǔ)， “對(duì)??感興趣”。9. What 后加 is。此句無(wú)謂語(yǔ)。10. hear 改為 hearing。look forward to doing sth.為固定短語(yǔ)。
改錯(cuò)五：答案：
76．去掉to 短語(yǔ)錯(cuò)誤。go abroad“出國(guó)”。
77．present→presents 名詞的數(shù)錯(cuò)誤。present“禮物”，是可數(shù)名詞。
78．去掉第二個(gè)were 動(dòng)詞錯(cuò)誤。interest在此是及物動(dòng)詞用法，意為“使??感興趣”。be interested in“對(duì)??感興趣”。
79．buys→bought 時(shí)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤。由全文可知，用一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)。
80．√
81．them→it 代詞錯(cuò)誤。在這本書(shū)里有關(guān)于肢體語(yǔ)言的圖片和不同國(guó)家的語(yǔ)言習(xí)俗。用it指代這本書(shū)。
82．put前加been 語(yǔ)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤。我的禮物被放在了你的臥室里了。禮物是被放在臥室里，所以用被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)。
83．that→which 定語(yǔ)從句關(guān)系詞錯(cuò)誤。介詞后用which，不用that。
84．but→and 連接邏輯錯(cuò)誤。前后是并列關(guān)系而非轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系。
85．few→little 混淆錯(cuò)誤。a little 與 little 可以用作副詞， 表示“有點(diǎn)”“稍稍” ，修飾動(dòng)詞、副詞、形容詞或介詞短語(yǔ)。如：He is a little tired.他有點(diǎn)累了。而a few不可用作副詞。
改錯(cuò)五 1.have去掉2.about后的you改為me 3.works→work 4.learn→learning
5.recent→recently 6.interesting→interest 7.English后的and改為but 8.be后加an
9.at→in 10.where后加there
改錯(cuò)六41. about→with/to 根據(jù)句意，可知此處是表達(dá)“和父母交談”，而不是“談?wù)摳改浮薄?/p>
42. as→even if 意為“好像”，與句意不符；根據(jù)句意，此處應(yīng)是表達(dá)讓步關(guān)系。故用even if ,意為“即使”。
43. going→getting get along well with 是固定短語(yǔ)，意為“和…相片融洽”。
44. √
45. way→ways some在此處修飾可數(shù)名詞復(fù)數(shù)。
46. walk前加a go out for a walk意為“出去散步”
47. and→or 此處表選擇關(guān)系。
48. are→were “他們年輕時(shí)候”應(yīng)用動(dòng)詞的過(guò)去式。
49. our→their 和they保持一致。
50. honesty→honest 形容詞honest 作表語(yǔ)。
短文改錯(cuò)dear篇三：2011---2013高考英語(yǔ)真題短文改錯(cuò)及答案
高考短文改錯(cuò) 1
2011年普通高等學(xué)校招生全國(guó)統(tǒng)一考試(浙江卷)
I was playing at my cousin house. Since his family was rich than mine, he had more toys than I did. There was one on particular I’d always wanted. I put into my pocket when he wasn’t looking. I guessed, even at that age, I would never be able to enjoy to playing with the toy or faced my cousin again; I would always know I’d done something wrong. Late on, my aunt drove me home. When she dropped me off, I pulled out the toy slow and gave it back. She knows what had happened, but she thanked me and ever mentioned it again.
第一節(jié)（10分，每小題1分）
1.cousin – cousin’s 2. rich – richer3.on --- in4.put ---put it/that 5. enjoy to --- enjoy
6.faced --- face 7. Late --- Later8.slow --- slowly 9. knows --- knew 10. ever --- never
高考短文改錯(cuò) 2
2011年普通高等學(xué)校招生全國(guó)統(tǒng)一考試(遼寧卷)
In early January this year, the rate of UFO reports was steady ,around three per
week. When, however, on Monday, January 16, a science fiction film about visitors from outer space was shown on television ,there was the immediate increase in reports of sightings from all parts of the States. The commanding officer ,Wayne Tyler ,who directly responsible for the study all such reports ,decided to making his findings known. They wrote an article ,which said that all UFO reports could be explained for quite naturally by aircraft movements. Follow this explanation ,there was a rapid drop in the number of reported sightings ,because the rate remainded above the previous level.
注：文章紅色部分為需要修改的地方！
第1個(gè)考查 主謂一致，were—was;
第2個(gè)考查 名詞單復(fù)數(shù) weeks--week
第3個(gè)考查 介詞從外面來(lái)，介詞應(yīng)該用from.
第4個(gè)考查冠詞 the--a
第5個(gè)考查非限制性定語(yǔ)從句 注意be responsible for 表示對(duì)什么負(fù)責(zé)。who后加 was或is 第6個(gè)考查非謂語(yǔ) decide to do sth. making—make
第7個(gè)考查代詞 指代前面Wayne Tyler，因此用They--He。
第8個(gè)考查動(dòng)詞explain是及物動(dòng)詞，不需要介詞。去掉for
第9個(gè)考查非謂語(yǔ)做狀語(yǔ)用follow---following.
第10個(gè)考查連詞 because 表示原因，根據(jù)上文應(yīng)該是表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系的連詞。
because---although/though/but/yet
高考短文改錯(cuò)3
2011年普通高等學(xué)校招生全國(guó)統(tǒng)一考試(陜西卷)
Last Sunday morning，when l was having a walk in the park near my home，I came
across a crew make a new film with one of my favourite actor．I didn’t have my camera with me at that time，．Unfortunately，by the time I gotback，they have finished the scene and the actor couldn’t be seen everywhere．I was really disappointing and about to leave when he walked out a building．He was right there in the front of me! I couldn’t believe my luck--not only did I had my photo taken with him，
but he signed his name on my shirt!
答案：
Last Sunday morning，when l was having a walk in the park near my home，I came I didn’t have my camera making actors
with me at that time，?．Unfortunately，by the time I got so／andit
back，the actor couldn’t be seen I was really hadanywhere ?a building．He was right there in disappointedof front of me! I couldn’t believe my luck，
have
but he signed his name on my shirt!
高考短文改錯(cuò) 4
2011高考英語(yǔ)試題（新課標(biāo)卷）
My summer travel started terribly .I was at the Shanghai Railway Station buy a ticket to Hang Zhou. I was going to visit a friend here and after that I would go to Xiamen for long holiday. I bought my ticket but turned around to pick up my bag from the floor and then I realized that someone had stolen it. Luckily I had all my money on my pocket, but the only clothes I had was those I had on. It felt very strange to travel without any luggages. When I finally arrived at my friend he lent to me lots of clothes. I feel very happy that I could change my clothes at last.
答案：
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Ticket to HangZhou.I was going to visit a friend and after that I would go to
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Xiamen for ∧long holiday.I bought my ticket turned around to pick up my bag
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from the floor and then I realized that someone had stolen it. Luckily I had all my
money my pocket, but the only clothes I had those I had on. It felt very
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strange to travel without any . When I finally arrived at my he lent
luggage friend’s lots of clothes. I very happy that I could change my clothes at last.Felt
高考短文改錯(cuò) 5
2012年浙江高考英語(yǔ)試題
Two years before, I traveled to Brazil and I rented for a car. Unfortunate, I had an accident and
hit another car, and I needed to stay in a hospital for at least two week. 1 called my parents, so I didnot tell them what had happened. I knew that they will be worried about myself because I
was so farther away, and that my mother would not sleep if she knew. Therefore, I told them
interested stories and how I was enjoying Brazil As a result, nobody knew truth. I still think that
it was the right thing to do.
第一節(jié) 短文改錯(cuò)
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wouldmewas so away, and that my mother would not sleep if she knew. Therefore, I told them
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高考短文改錯(cuò) 6
2012年普通高等學(xué)校招生全國(guó)統(tǒng)一考試(遼寧卷)
Dear Diana,
Thank you for the lovely day we have with you. It was so kind for you to let us bring Anne’s friend, Gina. Unfortunate, the only problem was the journey home. There had been a terrible accident on through highway and, for a result, there was a long line of traffic for at least six mile. In the end, we drove to the service station and waited there unless the road was clear. In the car park here Gina nearly got knocked over as a car drove out too quickly from behind a lorry. They finally dropped Gina off at her parents’ and made our own way to home.
Much love
Fiona
答案：
Dear Diana,
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高考短文改錯(cuò)7
2012全國(guó)英語(yǔ)高考真題 陜西卷
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